tell me what you think of these lyrics? i'll give you a feel what the songs like.?

so i wrote this on my guitar. i think it's kind of country/poppy/rockish. i don't know. its like, slow, but energized. like, not extremely slow. think of just a live version of the song.

i see your face i see your eyes,

i'm trying so hard to get into your mind.

i know something's missing,

you have to feel it too,

it's inevitable..

we have to break through.

Tell me what makes you weak,

tell me what makes you cry,

tell me what breaks you down,

i promise i won't leave you tonight.

open up,

let me inside.

let me be the one to make you smile.

we'll get better in time.

where is all the long conversations,

the i can depend on you for anything,

as long as you're with me i'm fine?

where's the rushes of adrenaline,

goofing off laughing over everything,

you make me feel alive.

i see your face i see your eyes,

i'm trying so hard to get into your mind.

i know something's missing,

you have to feel it too,

it's inevitable..

we have to break through.

Tell me what makes you weak,

tell me what makes you cry,

tell me what breaks you down,

i promise i won't leave you tonight.

open up,

let me inside.

let me be the one to make you smile.

we'll get better in time.

and i can't help but feel like..

you're gonna wake up and realize..

i'm not what you want.

i guess i should open up like i want you to.

i'll take my chances, see this through.

i'm not giving up on youu.

i see your face i see your eyes,

i'm trying so hard to get into your mind.

i know something's missing,

you have to feel it too,

it's inevitable..

we have to break through.

Tell me what makes you weak,

tell me what makes you cry,

tell me what breaks you down,

i promise i won't leave you tonight.

open up,

let me inside.

let me be the one to make you smile.

we'll get better in time.

and then just ending it..