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JRob
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JRob asked in Education & ReferenceHomework Help · 1 decade ago

Is anyone willing to critique my essay?

I have a deadline in about 5 hours at midnight, and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read my college admission essay, and give me some feedback? Please.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Where is it? Is there supposed to be a link?

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    5 years ago

    Wow, i think of its large and could have a complicated time to permit you comprehend what to alter. that's going to be very complicated for somebody to assert something undesirable approximately this, you're properly examine and probable have positioned some genuine concept into this and are additionally emotionally charged approximately it, sturdy for you!! i'm a white guy who did make an effort to envision this and am saddened that those issues even must be noted, yet I do think of there is alot of racial stress nevertheless available and there are alot of folk nevertheless feeling the effect of lots of years in the past. In Canada we don't have this subject, or a minimum of no one i comprehend acts or speaks this type. If in basic terms we could all stay in peace, i comprehend I do and experience each human I run into!!!! there is no longer something in Canada that must be completed for the races, because of the fact i do no longer think of there are races right here, there are in basic terms people and friends and neighbor's, luv them each and all the comparable or hate them each and all the comparable!! sturdy write!!

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