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R&P: Mind reviewing a short poem (:?
comments & critiques are very welcome as usual. this is just a tiny one (:
It’s hard to concentrate.
My mind can hardly think.
It would be much easier
To fill it to the brink
With music.
Evacuate my head,
And fill it with a tune.
When peace is hard to get,
Whisper something in my ear.
Sing my favorite song.
Let me hear the melody,
Even though the words are wrong.
A tiny bird once said to me
The sweetest sound I’ve heard,
The faintest little whistle
Something so absurd.
8 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
That was great Michelle! Keep up the great work!!!!
PEACE FOO
- Anonymous5 years ago
it is rather good to work out you posting Sue. recommendations over remember. definite, i think you have written a solid message that many right here, would be waiting to narrate to. do not enable it technique or filter out in it is precisely what you need to do while all and sundry is peddling untruths. How real your poem is. in case you do not digest it, then it won't devour you alive. this could additionally be utilized to any unsightly situation. in case you refuse to settle for it, then it can not harm you. Please do not stay away. it is totally lonely right here on the 2nd.
- 1 decade ago
I am not a critic but I thought is a very good little poem. If it comes from your heart then that is all that really matters anyway.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Love it :)
- Anonymous1 decade ago
i love ittt! :]