poem read plzzzz....10 easy points?

Try using more literary devices like metaphors, repetition, or alliteration! the make poetry flow better and sound darker or happy. they can make people /feel/ and become enforced my your choice of subject instead of just having just a mild understanding of the point you are trying to convey!

I think if you keep trying you could get a lot better! trust me, it took me forever to be not only happy with my poems, but to get others to enjoy them too!!

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