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Proofread My Translation?

I was asked to translate a script from English to Spanish (to make performance-ready), but despite my attempts, I am not entirely certain that these bolded bits are accurate. (Though I'm sure there are many errors; feel free to point them out.)

Spanish trans.:http://forum.wordreference.com/showpost.php?p=9067...

English original: http://forum.wordreference.com/showpost.php?p=9067...

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  • 1 decade ago
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    y el aire está espeso con la promesa sofocante de fuertes lluvias.

    ¿Hay alguien ahí?

    La criatura SE LANZA A LA PARED,

    la situación es seria! No estoy ni CERCA de estar OK-bien.

    NO LO VOY A MATAR por TI.

    Entonces, cuando el monstruo LO ESTE ATACANDO, SALDREMOS CORRIENDO POR la puerta y NUNCA MAS REGRESAR.

    NOS ESCONDEMOS AL otro lado del mundo y no volveremos hasta bien entrado el PROXIMO siglo.

    Ambos se quedan CONGELADOS DE horror. En la pared de Eva está una cucaracha enorme, AUN más grande que LA ULTIMA.

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