Want some input on my art work?

Some wild stuff, Jay!

*The "Portrait of 3 Children" is downright creepy, but the pastel of Tara and Mi is enchanting.

*I love the Southwest mural in the bar room.

*The granddaughter portrait has some anatomy proportion issues making her look too old. The facial shape is too long, and the values (I know, it's a WIP) around the mouth are off...Since it is a chariscuro, perhaps the white of the canvas is contributing to your difficulties...

*The "Portrait of a Teenage girl" is nice, except for the shadows around the mouth. They are too ashy, and make her face look dirty, especially her right cheek.

*The Skyline and Hunting Party murals are too tiny, with too much negative space around them. Especially the Hunting Party. You have some good rendering skills, Fill your space up with your subjects more. Same goes for the Roman Gothic. Fill that area with those structures.

*Reflections is a cute concept, but the lighting on the model is the opposite of where you have shadows painted...

*Anyone for Strawberries is good, but you again, the lighting on the berries does not match the lighting on the model.

Overall, some great, creative, pieces. It was a pleasure to look at them, thanks for sharing!

~Moz

Jay, Your link showed up for me. I like your work. It looks fantastic. You're good with drawing faces. Nice!

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i like your work . i envy your skill . you should make a DEVIANT ART account . you'd get alot more feedback