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could someone with good english please cheack this for me ?

Hi Aer Lingus

Despite my earlier email,.and your failure to reply . I however passed on your banner headline to " Tell a friend " , to lots of friends who l were equally , dismayed at the fact the TOTAL PRICE suddenly changed at the end of the book in to be nothing like the original quote , ie , when booking for two adults and a child ( 50% ) off ofer , the Total price seemed to ignore the fact that there were 3 persons ,travilling , and also the fact the the childs fare was more than the adult fare . Your site is at least very misleading , at most Ryanairsh . As I had promised the quoted the price to friends , I stood my ground and took the loss , but but appericate an explenation , of what I find is underhanded advertising , via email type promotions .As you fly the flag of what was once an airline, I would have being proud to say, I was from the country of origin , I feel very dissapointed ,in the fact your quailty of sAttach files more easilyervice, has gone so down market , on what I see as the future of marketing , the Internet . As I said before I booked the flights anyway , but please reasure me that in future you may look into what I and friends find totally misleading in your " TOTAL PRCE " box ,on the you book cheap fares site . Looking foward to a reply .

Your Sincerly

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Dear Aer Lingus,

    Despite my earlier email and your failure to reply, I have passed on your banner headline to "tell a friend" to a lot of friends who were equally dismayed at the fact of the total price change. At the end of the book it was nothing like the original quote, ie. When booking for two adults and a child (50%) offer. The total price seems to ignore the fact that there were three persons traveling, and also that the child's fare was more than the adult fare. Your website is very misleading. After I had promised the quoted price to friends, I stood my ground and took the loss. However, I would appreciate an explanation of what I find underhanded advertising via email type promotions. As you fly the flag of what was once an airline, I would have been proud to say I was from that country. I feel very disappointed in the quality of Attach marketing on the internet. As I said before, I booked the flights anyway but please reassure me that in the future you will look into the "total price" box on the cheat air fairs website, as friends and I find this totally misleading. Looking forward to a reply.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Source(s): English is my native language.
  • 1 decade ago

    It's just reading as gibberish!

    Try to organise it into paragraphs and loose the BLOCK CAPITALS!

    No-one likes to be shouted at.

  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    It's fine the way it is, just send it like that. Maybe.. start with 'Dear Sir', rather than the informal 'Hi'.

    When starting 'Dear Sir' you should finish with ' Yours faithfully', rather than sincerely.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    what is that? and loose the block capitals.and thats to hard to read. and organize it into ppharagraphs. thatll help. its just like reading gibberish. i personally couldnt understand it.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Just e-mail : aer lingus, sod off wankerz!!!!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    This is not English.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    That's perfectly fine. Keep it as is.

  • 1 decade ago

    are you trying to be funny?

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