what do you think of my speech?

I think you went overboard. Perhaps it's humor you are trying to inject to your speech, or just something different. But if you do ask me, you'd have to concentrate on what you can do as secretary, and that's where you add the humor and concentrate on making it different. People wouldn't really care where you've been or what you've done. And besides, if your final life goal is just being the class secretary...then you are missing out on a lot of things, after all.

Although I did like this part:

"I'll be more than just the person who writes stuff down. I'll be the person who takes your suggestions, puts them in a pretty little binder with cool tab dividers and gives you a voice."

Don't get me wrong. You can write, but I guess this kind of writing isn't appropriate for this kind of speech.

Good luck, and may you win :)

It's great i honestly would vote you you sound like an an awesome person. But i don't know i think you put too much on the lady gaga i think maybe take out the "I was touching people who were touching lady gaga." But wow you got to do all that stuff wow i have never done anything like what you have done everything else was great good luck :)

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It kind of sounds like you're overdoing it, I mean all this for freshmen rep? People really aren't going to care about what you've done in your lifetime, they're going to care about what you're going to do as secretary. Are you responsible? Are you going to use your time to benefit the school and the freshmen class? Put those things in your speech, not just a big list of things you've done in your lifetime.

It's okay, but I have always been told to split my speeches into paragraphs, kind of like an small essay.

At the beginning of each paragraph should something like this: First of all, next, Thirdly Finally, and stuff like that.

Interesting speech by the way ;)

There is more to life than some crazed ***** who dresses really weird to catch peoples attention.

Awesome, Girl!

Too pretentious. What does any of that other stuff have to do with being class secretary? what have you accomplished?

You had me gag gagging at gaga. That would have been so cool if you had all been struck by lightning.

I think its good. You went a little overboard with the Lady Gaga thing.