Would you read and c/c my edited poem?

It's beautiful like the Author Elaine ?

It is perfect!

10000/10000AAAAAAAAAA++++++++AAAAAA++++++

The highest score ever known it will make the Guinness so leave perfection alone!

Best Wishes.

Mars Mission. (Earth).

14th Year Psychology Student.

4th Year Hypnotism Student.

4th Year Music Composition Student.

32 Years Qualified Auto Technician.

I whisper

I try

I kneel

I sing

I sit

I have

I wipe

I stand

I plead

I turn

I am

I whistle

I walk

I long

I loved

I paint

I’ll always

I close

There's no place for a reader to see or feel, it's all speaker oriented.

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It's a beautiful poem.

I have a feeling the latest raging tide of stupidity is beginning to ebb. Or the trolls have a hangover, because there aren't seven TDs on every answer here. :)

Your last stanza carried the poem outside of the word 'whistle'. Probably just me again!

We do have to believe, don't we? I came back from the dead, remember nothing, but still believe in something. Energy is never lost, our souls are energy to me.

Unrequited love paints its sad picture, but could smell the sea and winds and sadness lovely poem

I enjoyed it the first time and enjoy it now, and the last line, typo or not is the power line. Thank you.

Now, you're talking. I can't fault it...a lovely verse, which engaged me visually and emotionally.

(I realised about the typo!)

this might be the best poem I have seen from you, I liked it the first time and I still do

... shall we all dress up as trolls?