You wanna go were everybody no's your name?

Okay.

I could see the moist on such a floor

but it is also sticky and thick with dirt

especially along the lines, the edges

where such creatures tread

and I think rats have nails/claws...

yes?

so would it not be more like a moist pattering

like the lighter, more filmy sound of a muffled drizzle?

I mean the combination of the elements involved

when combined... very much like a funkaye, gentle rain

so light it is ethereal. Yet I can hear it through your words.

Um I hope you don't mind my saying, my speculating

the differences owt loud between pattering and stampering

(the latter of which you have me looking up just to see if

it's a real word though I could hear that too but that would

be more then like a louder, more ferocious stampede of

scampering arrat tatooey so to speak. haha I dunno.

So much other stuff I liked that made me smile and laugh

just thinking about, though at first I found it depressing

until I looked again.

( I've been watching reruns wacky fun.)

I could do w/o the rats, but this sounds deserted, passe

you set a scene, nice three line wind up,

gone but not forgotten. Cheers to your pen.

i'd rather go Where The Streets Have No Name

I remember waking up in that alley in Norfolk

can you tell me what happened?

This is one of your best my friend.

If there are rats, I'm going to be on a table top not a barstool.

"The happy sound of a puddle"...sweet.x.

I don't see you often but when I do you're amazing. Cheers to you!!

Tantalizing in its desperateness.

....a screw misplaced in a Bag O Nails

NORM !!!