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Noah Thall
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Noah Thall asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

I just finished this very short poem. Have you ever read anything sadder?

Grief

Loss floats on the slow

Current of bereavement

For life taken from us.

The Earth, broken by grief,

Sits half in darkness

And moans very low.

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    Indeed, we will pay.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Sadder? Yes.

    But the 2nd stanza is very good.

  • brat with bratitdude
    1 decade ago

    I don't know if i have read anything sadder but i know this is pretty cool

  • KMcG
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    He stopped loving her today,

    They placed a wreath upon his door.

    Source(s): George Jones
  • cassie58
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Yes I have, but I do like your second stanza

  • Irwin
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    Ya

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Sadder.....no

    More sad, yes...

    Though,

    I still likes.

  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    It's kind of sad alright, but......

    have you taken a look at your tongue

    lately, Doc?

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