Would you read my book? Does it sound interesting?

yea ill read it :D it sounds good keep working on it

The characters do not sound too stable, i might artwork on rewriting them... although, the tale plot itself sounds truly stable, different than it has one subject; no person is dying. extremely than those 4 people, have the whole airplane join the e book. Have a pair of million/2 killed out suited away, and a a million/2 greater interior the 1st important impediment. Have possibly 12 element of perspectives (not one consistent with financial ruin nevertheless), all of them presented as a ability important character, yet have 3 of them killed off interior the preliminary massacre. prepare that anybody can die. As for the remainders, have them be picked off slowly, possibly have approximately 5 or 6 (mutually alongside with your unique 4) nevertheless alive by utilising the top of the 1st e book, as long as assorted the individuals who're left with no POV (yet not all). Make the deaths twisted and unfair. confident, confident, very morbid... i understand...

Yeah, but maybe different names for Wanda, Nikka, Taylor, Jess?

Ariana, Kristen, Taylor, Sabrina

It sounds like a book I'd read.

It seems a little cliche and not written very well...and the snippet doesn't really tell a lot about what the actual plot of the novel is. I mean, I get that there's obviously going to be conflict between your protagonist and "The Bitches", but is there anything else that's going on?

sounds intresting but really? another book about a loser girl and the popular crew??

That's you're first chapter? or just a snippit...?

To be honest, no. It's cliche, it's not interesting. It's not worded very well.

yeah! sounds good

yah its cool