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Is it cold where you are today (poem for c/c)?
“Cold Outside”
streaks of phosphorescent dawn
skim the snow like darting swallows
oblique bands of January sunlight
dance with youthful grace of motion
clear air bites like hungry wolves
where wind and wilderness meet
like the two halves of a muffin
baby it’s cold outside
8 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
cool descriptors...get it, cool ?
- Caz :) xLv 71 decade ago
It's cold but the sun has been out , I like your poem
clear air bites like hungry wolves
where wind and wilderness meet
This is good :)
- ?Lv 71 decade ago
I love Dean Martin - he is one of my favorites. I live in Florida so it doesn't get as cold very often - but lately when it has been in the 20's I have been doing a fair imitation of singing "baby it's cold outside".
Sometimes the cold and these images you have given us seem sacred to me. Cold and we feel our vulnerability but we have the smugness our warm homes can give.
I miss it....every once in a while.
Yesterday and today have been in the 70's here - and that is when I do not miss the cold. hehe.
I admire the sibilance.
- Anonymous5 years ago
Ooh, i actually like it. I tremendously cherished only like the action picture understanding, and of the snow as satin sheets. there is something extremely calm with regard to the imagery, even with the unhappy undertones. As greater of a prose author, I envy people who can come out with genuine-sounding poetry. XD solid interest (: x
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Awesome!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
I really must go.