How do I improve my new painting "Convergence of Two Arrows" (facsimile enclosed)?

it's kind of bright and flashy, be true to yourself and think less of art critics want from your work. if the goal was to make me think about politics and the human condition as it reflects on society and the media then, well, point taken.

Why improve it? Bask in it's simplicity & enjoy the sharp contrast of two points meeting on a higher plain. Either that ot draw two nipples on it & sell it to Crash Fu.

put a smiley mouth under them and it will look like a facsimile of someone forcing a fart and thinking it's funny.

Put a buffalo in the background.

Crayons would add any finishing touches needed in this instance

Hang it next to its antithesis. Such an arty thing to do.

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I can see that you are inspired by the pictures made by cavemen

Everything you do is art.

pretend it's you and me. :)

where's your troll?

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