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Any suggestions for a good hook for this essay?
I have to write an expository essay about what i want to do after highschool and im choosing becoming a Mixed Martial Arts Fighter. I have all the paragraphs finished but im lacking a solid hook. Any good suggestions or ideas?? thanks
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- CarolynLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
You can use a general statement that leads into your reasons of why or how you plan to do this.
Something like: As a young child I was recognized as a formidable fighter, winning multiple awards throughout my early childhood martial arts training. After high school I am planning to expand on that, .......
- Anonymous5 years ago
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