Do you find this piece more...romantic rather than cheesy/corny?

[Sorry for re-post]

I realise there's users as young as 13 here, so I'm taking out the sexual content in the middle, and will just copy and paste the beginning and end and look forward to your comments. I realise plot's important but for this piece only, that isn't the main focus (just exercise)

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The night flashed a brilliant blue as lightening crackled in the sky. Rain poured and hit the roof with quick taps, and shortly after there was the sound of thunder.

“Weather’s horrible,” I groaned, pulling back the curtains.

“It’s warmer over here,” you said, cracking a cheeky grin to go with the cheesy porno line. I laughed and slipped under the purple satin duvet. I let my hand rest over your bare chest, whilst your fingers slipped under my pink silk shirt, and circled softly over my hip.

It was a Friday night in January. The weather had been bitter and the week felt long, so I was glad to be spending the night and the following day with you. We talked and laughed about a few things that happened during the day, but soon the conversation dropped down to a comfortable silence, and the rain fell more gently over the wet roads.

You brought your hand from under my shirt and tucked my fringe behind my ear.

“Really have to go back home tomorrow?" you asked, stroking my cheek.

"Unfortunately. Won't see you for a while." We grimaced in the silence, and your fingers made small circles at the back of my hand.

I watched the magnificent ice blue in your eyes as your face came closer to mine, and then I felt your warm breath over my lips after we kissed. Your lips were soft, so I kissed them again.

*middle*

I brought myself up and then by your side. We faced each other and kissed, much with the delight of our night spent together and we didn’t need to say anymore. I lay my head on your chest, and your arm was wrapped around to my shoulder as we just listened to the soft rain that fell under the moonlight.