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Please c/c this poem of absolute nonesense......?
HELL
The hall: dark, long
Walls of Tuscany gold
February like clouds lift
As if . . . Sun shines
Beckoning on words
Forward always too
Rodin carved doors
Demanding authority
Pity . . . battle ram
Needless—unlatched
Gait steady, stride
Gate opened wide
Reservations made
Prayed . . . I should’ve
Baptismal disappointment
Obsidian orbs
Indiscriminately capturing
Light eternally held
Fell . . . unmentionable depths
Arson, murder, theft
A chair, a throne
Mine to have
Minds to own
Else led to the hall
Dark and long
6 Answers
- doeLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
I seriously wish you were here more often but this was so worth the wait. This is what regret feels like, I love your play on words. I love the Baptismal disappointment - neat way of saying it. This was great!
- Caz :) xLv 71 decade ago
I bet this is a very good poem , if I could understand it I'm not very good at figuring poetry out lol
A chair, a throne
Mine to have
Minds to own
Else led to the hall
Dark and long
To deep for me , but excellent poetry I'm sure it will be thank you :)
- jennyLv 71 decade ago
Look who's back, hello.
Not nonsense, eerie chill.
Dallas could be right,
Or disappointment in ones church.
or the missing of the narrow gate.
- 1 decade ago
I don't see it as absolute, but maybe that was yer intent.
What I got from it, especially tied in by the end, is Satan sendin out invites.
- ?Lv 71 decade ago
Reported.......
As a very good poem
reminds me of the walk when I was sent to the principles office
Thank for sharing Mix
