Stepping away from form and etiquette.......c/c?

I swear that was only your true stream of consciousness all the way through, no pause to work words to make them sound better...you were exhaling this like a final breath as, sinking, you know the water will fill your lungs upon next inhalation. That is how I perceived it, like a compulsion beyond your willpower to control. Reflex probably held in check since the knowledge came to you, and guess what? It is the only poem about the whole horrific sad situation that actually honors the PEOPLE GOING THROUGH IT...we aren't.

Michael asked a question about Hiroshima right before we got the news. This one isn't our fault but I bet it will also be forgotten by the mainstream media society as quickly, just like the Gulf spill, just like Katrina. But Pearl Harbor, Nazis and the horrors that people of Jewish faith endured? Still subjects talked about often. And THAT is because of money to be made and other things being covered up.So what I will leave here in conclusion is this:

Hiram had(has?) a dream or goal or wish of getting people to help at sites of the Gulf spill damage THIS SUMMER because, he said then, "people will have forgotten except those still coping with the foul mess in their environment. The help would actually be given for no reason but because of the need. I wonder if he will be there? I believe he certainly will.

Sin, I truly consider you one of the few that has always kept it real. Kudos to the 10th power. You RAWK!!

There is an asteroid far off in an elliptical orbit that will one day cross paths

with our chaotic planet. In time we will have three moons and no humans

to witness and compose poems about. If humans continue their present

course, a hit from an asteroid will be the ultimate tree

falling silently in wasted forests, no ears to hear or eyes to witness.

The odds are not in our favor, as 99.99% of all species to inhabit this

planet have gone extinct.

A very interesting and poignant poem you have written.

You are wise. Seeing it from the "other" point of view is a thinker's process. But I don't think Mother Nature is sorry for what she did. Justice is simply reacting in a blind way. Injecting emotions into nature is something only a true poet can do. Excellent pen!

Outstanding, message Sin, even if you were standing outside to share it with us. Kudos

oh, but my! you have put into words what I would have wanted but my mind is about as berserk as mother nature

I felt this to my core, and we will feel much more before we ruin the world forever..

thank you!

I Loved It!!

..Sin...I remembered something as I read....

"This is going to hurt me..more than it hurts you"

You rocked it girl!

I think it has captured all th right motions!

This is amazing - truly.