What happens when old wounds re-open?

Excellent - You broke the butterfly, that hurts like hell. A really good read Evadne. On second and third reading, the ending is chilling.

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Very good poem!

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The physical transcends the imagination.

Nice piece.

A broken butterfly, what a tragic line.

I love it

Touched.

My heart.

Your poem did.

Thanks.

Write more.

Please.