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Yo people what do you think of my rap lyrics that ive done so far?

Late awake, I contemplate, facing the ceiling

I pray I stay safe coz this place seems deceiving

Its not a game you can play and achieve in

Gotta escape from the face of the demons

See, God is great but they hate to believe it

We want a change, everyday its a reason

Im on a rise, so wake if your sleeping

Its all a lie but its made for believing

Sometimes in life it takes a while to see things but in this life time I don't like what im seeing

In my right mind so I write with a meaning

Fight for your freedom or die while you dream it

Reach for the sky as I try to exceed it

Keep what is mine but leave whats not needed.

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  • 9 years ago
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    Damn bro I thought that was some good ****! I like how it actually has a message ya know? When spittin' those verses change up the tempo. Like maybe rap the first half slow then speed it up, or vise-versa. It'll give it a unique twist ya dig?

    Like if you did the line, "Sometimes in life it takes a while to see things but in this life time I don't like what im seeing," as fast as you can that'd be tight.

  • 9 years ago

    I thought it was great, you had a message and that's rare nowadays

    Source(s): Me
  • 9 years ago

    Shut up astro you suck

  • 9 years ago

    You sound like a goddamn juggalo

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