Yo people what do you think of my rap lyrics that ive done so far?

So confused, they don't wanna know

I've not got a clue, which way to go

Alone, on my own in this place I call home

Take away my soul but I pray to the one that always close

Say what you want, this the life I chose

A child for a while but finally grown

My eyes wide open, I see what you wont, I see what you DON'T

No lies when I speak as I read what I wrote

High off the weed but im keeping low

The sky I'll reach if I keep the hope

The way to achieve is to keep with code

Believe in a reason, my dreams on a hold

Proceed on the road, it seems so cold

Leading my own, all I need is a vote

I seek the unknown, conceive and provoke

Its time to be me and receive whats owed

Coz I be the beast that feeds off the globe

My life is a piece to the beat that flows

My mind is the key, I exceed and grow

By my side is the heat and in time I'll blow

A ride with the breeze and you might just know

Like a thief in the night, I'll creep in your home

Put three through your dome, three time in a row

Till you see whats shown

Believe in a clone, beneath you may go

Leave what is old, forever I preach whats never been told

Never I be deceived by the crow

Whatever the fee, im ready to role

Whatever the plea, his ready to loan

So much greed, in this world we roam

Its a mystery that I've already solved