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Ben Dover
Ben Dover asked in Entertainment & MusicMusicRap and Hip-Hop · 9 years ago

Check out my rap please.?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VEIc1tlUOK8

So i wrote this as an anniversary gift for my special lady friend. I'd like some feedback on how it sounds and my lyrics and whatnot. I was considering making more videos in the future and some feedback would be really helpful in making that decision.

And if you get a chance, check out the girl that sings the hook. She's kinda sorta really amazing.

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  • bright4eyes20
    9 years ago
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    Haha nice troll man.

    but the girl is actually pretty good.

  • Microphone Fiend
    Lv 4
    9 years ago

    Two things

    -Could barley hear what you wear saying. Memorize the rap and spit it out with confidence

    -The girl is great, she can really sing and thought she out shined you. The hell you doing with the paper, I could hear understand everything she was saying.

    Improve on your confidence, your volume and your rap lyrics overall and you will improve.

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