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How can I make my erotica stories more realistic?

I love to write all different kinds of stories in all different kinds of genre's. My favorite genre is erotica, but every time I try to write an erotic story I feel like the erotic sex scenes to feel real. What can I do to make my stories seem more realistic?

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  • 9 years ago
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    I love reading good erotica.

    Add some of the stuff that seems less perfect. Perhaps when that couple are falling into the bath together, taking off their clothes gets tangled... but they laugh about it together.

    Put them in situations that aren't so outlandish. Instead of the headteacher keeping his student behind for some schooling, bent over his desk (still fun though, haha)... try a hookup in a club. Do a date scene, but focus on the chemistry of conversation first.

    If it's a longer story, don't give them a happy ending. Have someone die, have them break-up or be pulled apart by fate.

  • 4 years ago

    They have been status close at the same time dealing with one yet another the room grow to be heat. He gazed into her eyes,gently kissed he brow, she then raised her head to the kissing place, placed her arms around him and grow to be respiration heavily together with her head resting on his shoulders. His palms wandered in direction of her breasts, and she or he moved slightly tighter together with her decrease limbs, and heaved a extensive sigh. He word a door ajar and interior the process the hollow would desire to work out it grow to be a mattress room. :> regardless of none real adventure you could fill interior the rest. interior the morning he awakened her wih a espresso by potential of giving her a comfortable kiss.

  • 7 years ago

    it will be more realistic if you write about sex that doesn't look too "fantastic", especially when you're doing romantic sex fiction :)

    Source(s): fictionerotica.wordpress.com
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