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Does this poem sound right?! Does it make sense?!?
Stress(it's about stress)
Thinking about colleges gives you a lot of pressure.
Although, thinking can create thoughts of a refresher.
Stress is all around us.
But, with the options we have we don’t have to make a fuss.
Will I get accepted into the college I want?
Or will I just get the sense of haunt?
Whether it be the extracurricular activities,
Or the amount of creativity.
Showing your all can take you far.
It can even appear as a star.
PLEASE TELL ME IF THIS IS GOOD OR IF NOT TELL ME WHAT I CAN FIX!! THANKSSSS!;)
Second line: *refresher meaning thinking refreshes your mind, clears your thoughts
THIS IS A POEM FOR A PROJECT, IT DOESN'T MATTER IF IT'S OUTLINED OR WHATEVER, IT JUST HAS TO RHYME...SO DOES IT!?!?
5 Answers
- Anonymous9 years agoFavorite Answer
As a person i like it...as a poet i feel i should inform u that u dont HAVE to rhyme.
- Anonymous5 years ago
i don't believe orange is the wide-spread colour for peace, in spite of the undeniable fact that i might want to assert that's comfortable blue.. or lavendar.. a tranquil colour. appears like.. birds chirping a contented music or water trickling from a ordinary brook. Tastes like sweet, fluffy cotten sweet. Smells a twin of the day after the rain, or the calming ocean breeze. desire this helps..
- 9 years ago
its okay...but what does thoughts of a refresher mean?? use an rhyming dictionary...so you can subsitute words
- 9 years ago
it's alright. not much to think about since you blatantly tell what your problem is instead of making similes and metaphors
