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RHH: Rate/Hate the verse....?
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I'm my own worst critic when I'm asking for advice//
Look deep into the mirror, let your question be precise//
I'm probably the only one who'll ever tell the truth//
At least to myself, minus the chosen few//
That I've marked with the scarlett let (led) it don't be confused//
When the pencil tip needs to be blunt I come to you//
Sharpen up my actions, better guide me on the path//
Toughen up my skeleton for any kind of impact//
That puts my back against the mat, I'm finding this suprising//
Imma pick myself up 'til the pain is paralyzing//
Paramedic paramedic, come and bring some anaesthetic//
Drown away the pain and bring some life to make him energetic//
It's pathetic, don't you get it? Aint no time for symphatetic//
Cats cry me a river 'cause they're hopping one legged//
Yeah I said it, don't forget it f*ck feeling disrespected//
Imma walk (work) to get my credit even if my leg's prosthetic//
@Batte Akai - Sorry dun, I aint
got no mic or recording
sh*t....My bad homie! Anyway, I
don't think I'd do one of your
beats justice lol. Best of luck on
the project man, I can't wait to
hear it. You're gonna go far
dun....
5 Answers
- Cage Kennylz'Lv 69 years agoFavorite Answer
Dope.
-1 for starting a verse with "I" as Shad (The God, himself) said
"I don't like to start verses with I, y'know, but, um //
ITunes, eye-patch..... "
=P
- 9 years ago
I acctually like it. I give it an 8. Continue with what you're doing and good luck! :)
- Anonymous9 years ago
It flows pretty nicely. Just really repedative and abit predictable. like "anaesthetic//energetic//symphatetic//" just work on that. bt an 5 and a half. keep working.
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