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What should we do ? Please be kind.?
It was so right or it was so wrong
But it was all at the same time.
Lust burnt both you and me
And passion made me drunk
No body knows what have happened
Till love made out the night
And we realised it was a crime
A crime of the heart
What should i do?
What could we do?
To make it right.
10 Answers
- NatLv 79 years agoFavorite Answer
That old devil Moon (be it day or night), affecting oceans and human passion. If other partners are involved, let it fade, don't assuage your conscience by confessing and hurting others. We are human and prone to let the passion of the moment have its way.
L - 5..."knows what (has) happened, unless you insert "could" before "have."
..........Also should be "Nobody", rather than "no body"
There is no changing what happened...and if it was a betrayal of another's trust, live with it...but don't ever let the betrayed party(s) know. Relationships are forever altered and can never be fully mended with this sort of confession. Time will heal your guilt. Both of you keep your lips "zipped up" (pun intended)
Source(s): As Lovechild noted...you should let your poetic juices flow and write more.(no pun intended). - RosalindaLv 79 years ago
Hi. I like the image and the mood in your poem. I think a strong relationship between 2 people should take time to work on it, and it should only involved those 2 a third party opinion should not be required, for the sake of one relationship to work. I like what Gene said, zipped our mouth it's the best thing to do.
- 9 years ago
Thats an alright poem put a few other lines at the end maybe a surprise n the story
- THE BANNIBAL ONELv 79 years ago
I disagree with others here. I see nothing different then 100's of other poems.
Not personal,just a poem.Good writing about a normal subject.
Keep writing more.
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- lovechildLv 79 years ago
Tee3 looks like me when I was a teen. Hi girl!
I have been in the situatuion your poem describes . However, the heart is located a little higher in the body. This was simple bad judgement and failure ti control impulses.
And if I can do it anyone can...
Thanks I did enjoy seeing a poem from you as it is rare.KEEP WRITING!
- Anonymous9 years ago
It was lust, you can't do anything about it. Move on.