How to write a rap about hamsters :L?

I love my hamsters they're really cool

running around and acting fool

Waffle and Pickle really love the wheel

but Crumpet just hangs and does what he feels

When I'm trying to sleep they make a noise

fooling and playing with all of their toys

but in the morning the've gone to bed

and only come out when its time to be fed

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