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Another try, Rate again?
No diabolical, libel thats unjustifiable, cynical insults
To the man who critized my work, i expected critical results
he wanted internal like nocturnal or scared turtle so see lets see the pinnacle impulse
Meaning let me write what comes off the top like journal, and be sure no to bite, but i admireall not like a coronal, now lets see what the **** i pulled invokes
3 Answers
- Rap FanLv 69 years agoFavorite Answer
It's better than most stuff on here, but at the same time, a little hard to follow. Just keep the spelling/grammar all nice and neat.
You have potential, and a relatively good vocabulary. It took me a couple of reads to understand completely what you were getting at, but lots of good rap does.
Good luck.
- 9 years ago
Good lyricism but do not allow yourself to get lost in pure lyricism keep at a level you can flow with and feel comfortable at Rate:8.5
- kurtLv 49 years ago
wow that's great, i like it when people use their full potential and knowledge to do stuff
9/10
