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How do I get ri of to many I's in a personal essay?

please help, im writing an essay 900 words and like 50 of them are I;s

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  • 9 years ago
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    Never write an essay with personal pronouns. Change them to "one". As in one would, one should, what have you. Writing essays in personal pronouns is a good way to get an F.

    Source(s): expirience.
  • 9 years ago

    you could try saying:

    In my opinion/experience

    My experiences have shown me

    But really, unless I read the essay I couldn't offer alternatives, and in a personal essay using "I" is going to happen. there isn't a lot of ways to avoid it

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