How would this story sound. Is it good. It's a fanfic. ?

It was raining. I was already mad, my mom said I couldnt go to the One Direction concert tonight, that I bought tickets for. I was already upset and when I got home I would be even more upset. Maybe I can sneek out, my moms boyfriend doesn't deserve to go. I just needed to find those tickets. I walked in the house. My mom was sitting on the couch.

"Oh hi sweetie."

"Hi." I said madly.

"You okay?"

"Oh just dandy mom."

She relized i was upset and left me alone. I walked over to the cabinet where i put the tickets when i got them. They were still there. I grabed one.

"Mom, i'm going to Cindys. See you later."

"Alright have fun. Oh, Brandons gonna go to that concert."

"Rub it in my face."

I left, slamming the door. I saw Brandon pull into the drive way. I kept walking. Once my mom figured out he had no tickets, she would go. Trying to find me. I relized i took both tickets. I called Cindy and asked if she wanted to go. She accepted and got her mom to drive us. We got there and people were already going in. We walked in, spotting shirts, and cds to buy. We got to out seats and the concert started shortly after. Here came everybody running out. I yelled in excitement. All through the show Niall kept staring in me and Cindys direction. We also had meet and greet passes, so he could see me if he really wanted too. When they were reading the tweets from fans mine popped up. It said I sneeked out my house for this concert, so excited. Niall was reading it. He was looking around asking who said it. I yelled at raised my hand. They all looked and nudged Niall every two seconds. He was blushing. I got really excited. The meet and greet was about to start, so I ran to get in line. They all smiled. Niall saw me and smiled and blushed. Zayn started yelling and so did Harry. I walked over "Did I do something?"

"No. " Harry leaned over "it's just that Niall here" he pointed to him like i didnt know "has a crush on you. He thinks because well you pretty and you snuck out to see us." I blushed and Niall looked away. Smiling and laughing. I got my shirt a cd signed. When i got to Niall we both blushed. It was really akward. I left and Zayn ran after.

"Excuse me. Miss."

I turned towards him.

"Niall wanted me to give this too you , and may I ask whats Your name?"

"Katie."

"Alright, well we'll see you again. Go to the address on that paper."

I smiled and turned back around. I couldnt wait. Cindy couldnt belive it either. I looked at the paper and there was Nialls number and a address to somewhere.

What else should I add, and is it good? Thanks.