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PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS?!?!?
I'm trying to write a song from my heart and I've just been writing down random lines as I feel them but I need help to unjumble them so they make sense.
I can't bare to break your heart,
So i don't know where to start.
I grip these words between my teeth,
But I know they'll slip eventually.
I'm just trying to give your heart some peace.
They look at you and count the flaws,
As you try to climb those stone cold walls.
I try not to say anything wrong.
I'm trying to help you stay strong...
Then I dont know what else to put...
Sorry if it doesn't make much sense, it's about my friend who is in love with me but I would never go with him because of the first line... Can you help me out with it and tell me what you think of the lyrics? Thank you :)
1 Answer
- 9 years agoFavorite Answer
i love this line
They look at you and count the flaws, <3
and the first line could be like -- << i wont dare to break your heart > :)
otherwise i really like the song..the words rhyme perfectly..and i've already thought of a tune for them
keep writing.. :)
Source(s): songwriter