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This poem emphasizes the inherent sovereignty that is shimmering within your essence, noble and yet so full of humanity. You FEEL what you write and it shows, that is what attracts me to your work. The excellent skill that you have perfected with language arts is icing.

Every word in this poem has meaning, this one has feeling thoughts life's Worth's and none worth's

This write touches the very heart of me, as if it were wrote just for me.

Beautiful thought poetry .. Thank you :)

I live in the shadow

of Hercules,

... Yet no man bore witness to my birth,

so how can any, even priests, begin to know

if I might have sprung,

fully-formed,

from my Father's crown

Power poem

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? ?A possible dance upon the souls of blades and glory, ?A deepening of what looks revenged and sanctity, ?yet, rounds out with readability of purpose, empowerment restored, ? And for there who bypass thou blade in hand, ? For Kings and Dragons difficulty-free command, ?? Rebellious as all destiny and chagrin, ???There be no relax yet chaos whom enter inn, ..

I like it. It's a bit dark, but full of wisdom and insight.

An interesting thought process and discussion of a family becoming.

The pattern is also interesting.