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Please rate my poem on a 1-10 scale. It's titled, "My Wants"?
I want to kiss you more than ever
until my lips fade away
love you forever
and a day
your physique will change
but that won't bother me
my love for you will remain
like a boat anchored in the sea
we'll have our ups and downs
like every other couple
yet through all the yelling and screaming
you'll know that I still love you
7 Answers
- 9 years agoFavorite Answer
Poem: 4
Lyric: 8
This is a rhyme better suited to song than to word.
It will never make a mark in literature,
but could be a great piece if set to the right music and sang by a good vocalist.
You just need a hook now, heck... this could be a good one :-)
- Anonymous4 years ago
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