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Please rate my a capella spoken word on a scale of 1-10?

Cut the music

And kill thebeat

Because I don't need 'em

They trap me in a cage

And I want freedom

So I burst the drums

And I kill the keyboard

Freedom from my musical chains is my reward

Now let's see

What do I want to talk about today?

Debt

Sweat

Going to work and getting paid

My mind declines these four options

I'd rather talk about something that I deal with

Far more often

Being gay

And all of the options

Who to date?

How old or how young?

What ethnicity appeals to you?

And where to find 'em?

I'm all out of spoken words

So I'll end the poem here

I want to read your opinions

So please send them here

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  • 9 years ago
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    To me,its only fair.I give it a six.

    I enjoy rhyming poems more.

    Plus it should be longer.

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