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Would you rate my poem? First one in a while.?
My Broken Soul
I lie in the wake of misery.
I swim in the depths of my despair.
I once held to courageous intent.
Yet the ropes lie broken there.
I once had a dream
I once had a goal
Now lying crushed before me
Thus, my broken soul
My heart a lie
My soul no more
Nothing else
Worth waiting for
Bleeding before me
The face looks back
At my selfless body
Without a tact
No more hope
No more beauty
A life fit for a beast
A life – dead in me
The sight fades from me
My eyes grow dim
Not with truth of word
But soul within
This love no more
Has caused me to
Love no more
No love now due
1 Answer
- ~~*Milieu*~~Lv 79 years agoFavorite Answer
I'll rate it a 2 out of 10. Good for you for trying poetry, but you need to work on the art; who are you reading?
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