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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 9 years ago

Can you give your opinion on this short story?

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I wrote a short story for the first time and I would like an opinion on it.

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  • cletus
    9 years ago
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    very nice

    very interesting

    i noticed a grammar issue lol :)

    that story sounds very much like a story hans christian andersen would write (i am not saying this negatively)

    a very nice fairytale :)

  • ?
    9 years ago

    Pretty good for a creative story

  • Andy
    9 years ago

    Looks great! Keep practicing and you'll get better. You learn something new with each new story.

  • Phoenix Tears
    Lv 4
    9 years ago

    It looks pretty good. It sort of reminds me of the fairytales I used to read when I was younger.

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