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I met Wancy one time that I was going to make a school project with Carina his sister ( That was about in 2000). He was just getting home from his town ( Tequisate, Esquintla). Wancy was studying accounting in The capital and at that time Wancy was visiting his family. I didn’t know but he was supporting his family with work and money. Carina introduced us that day as well. Since that day, we started a beautiful friendship, he was always talking about God. Wancy was always advising me and asking me to seek God as much as I could because he was the solution to our problems in life.Days later I went to his church. It was a small Christian church called “ Principe de Paz”.

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  • Dawn
    Lv 5
    8 years ago

    I met Wancy around the year 2000, when I was doing a school project with his sister Carina. He was studying accounting in the capital, but was home in Tequisate, Esquintla, for a visit with his family. (I didn't know he was also supporting his family.) Carina introduced us, and we started a beautiful friendship that day. Wancy always talked about God, advising me to seek God as much as I could, because He was the solution to our problems in life. Days after I met him, I went with him to the small Christian church he attended, called "Principe de Paz."

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