David

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I am writing this essay for my English class. I am having a hard time editing this paragraph. Please help me with. Thank you very much

That night, we were kissing and touching all night long. It was amazing and incredible. Next day, we wanted to go out, get to know the city of Los Angeles and have a great time together. Next morning we left to Denver, Edgar was driving and Wancy and we were sitting in the back seats talking like birds that loved each other. When we got to Denver, he told me he was living with his uncle and until we got marry, I was going to be living with a friend of his.

Hi there,

I am writing this essay for my English class. I am having a hard time editing this paragraph. Please help me with. Thank you very much

Hi there,

I am writing this essay for my English class. I am having a hard time editing this paragraph. Please help me with. Thank you very much

I felt really sad and disappointed after talking with my mom because she was not supporting my wedding with Wancy and I wanted her to be happy with me not mad. Minutes later, I got on the phone and told wancy about my conversation with my mom. Wancy asked me if I really wanted to marry him and I said yes. So He told me, he would come to pick me up on February 24, 2006 and we would move to Denver and get marry there. Those were the hardest days of my life because my mom was not talking to me anymore.

Hi there,

I am writing this essay for my English class. I am having a hard time editing this paragraph. Please help me with. Thank you very much

For my birthday, he sent a beautiful gold neck less and pictures of Denver (where he was living) and other places he has visited. Two calls per week were not enough for me; I felt like I need to spend more time with him, I wish we could have talked once a day because our friendship was growing really nice. I was feeling love for him and constantly dreaming about him, I would pray to God every single day asking him to give a man like Wancy and we could make a beautiful family together. Although, I had other boyfriends and they were all different. Wancy was special and I love the way he would treat me, always calling me, always saying how much we liked me and somehow making plans for us and one day I would marry him.

Hi guys, I am actually learning English at school and I am witting an essay. Please revise it and tell me what I should change and how to make it better. Thanks a lot.

My mom has been living in Los Angeles, Ca for many years. Finally, On April of 2005, I could come to USA legally and came to my mom’s house. It was a huge charge for me because I haven’t been living with her for the last 17 years. Although, she used to visit us once a year when I was in Guatemala, our relationship wasn’t the best since we really know each other that well. Also, I only have step brothers and sisters, 4 kids are from one day, other 3 from a different dad and last bother is from another man.

Thanks

Hi guys, I am actually learning English at school and I am witting an essay. Please revise it and tell me what I should change and how to make it better. Thanks a lot.

After some months, Wancy called to his house and I was there visiting them and they told him I was there. He wanted to talk with me and they passed me the phone. He told me he was still going to church and growing up with God. He also told me about the new city he was living in, he said it was named Denver, Colorado and it was just amazing. He also told me about snow; it was beautiful and really cold. After that, Wancy asked me for my number because he wanted to talk more with me. That was a great day for me, I was surprised that I’ve talked with Wancy after long time of not seeing him. Many days later, he called me and honestly I thought he would had forgotten my number and he wasn’t going to call me anymore. I was living with my grandma and she didn’t let me use the phone during night hours. That day, I told Wancy I was going to travel to USA ( about in 2005) because my mom was getting me legal documents, then, I gave him my mom’s number in Los Angeles, Ca.

Hi there, I am writing an English essay and really need some help editing this paragraph. English is my second language and I make a lot of grammar errors when writing essays. Thanks for your help.

One day, I was at church and heard Wancy’s family requested a pray for him because he was planning on coming to USA and the journey would be hard. ( December 2002). Everybody was really sad because they all liked Wancy pretty much and he was leaving them. I went through a hard time that day, he was one of my best friends and somebody I could always count with. Time went by, and his family was always telling me about he was doing in his way to United States. I really felt lonely and sad, I know I was missing somebody really important in my life. My relationship with his family didn’t change at all and I was still going to the school his Carina his sister.

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I am translating this paragraph from spanish to English. Please edit it!! Thanks a lot.

I lived in Villa Hermosa (Beautiful village) which is a county/municipality of Guatemala City. Before meeting Wancy, I was going to school “Sagrada Familia “with his sister Carina. We went to the same school for about 2 years and we were the best friends ever, always together and doing school stuff/homework and other stuff as well. We were always talking about random stuff such as School drama, love, and family. There was a time she told me some really good things about her brother Wancy, she said he was an amazing brother, always going to church and she was surprised how God has changed Wancy’s life in so many ways. It was an unbelieve change and he was an example to all of them.Wancy was always supporting and advising them. She really trusted her brother Wancy.

I am learning english and have to write this paragraph. I know it has so many grammar errors, Please revise it and help me to make it better and good.Thanks a lot

I realized Wancy was a good guy and he was always helping others. We used to work together a lot such as visiting our church brothers and sisters, visiting people at hospitals or jails, decorating church for holidays such as Christmas , mother’s day, father’s day. Wancy was one of our church leaders and he liked to make poems, he would say them at church’s activities like mother’s day, etc.On a mother’s day, he made a beautiful poem and he told me that , Omg I got to hear it before everybody else. I felt so special because he liked me already and trust me as well.

This is what I wrong and I am sure it has many grammar errors. Please help me to correct it.

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I lived in Villa Hermosa (Beautiful village) which is a county/municipality of Guatemala City. Before meeting Wancy, I was going to school “Sagrada Familia “with his sister Carina. We went to the same school for about 2 years and we were the best friends ever, always together and doing school stuff/homework and other stuff as well. We were always talking about random stuff such as School drama, love, and family. There was a time she told me some really good things about her brother Wancy, she said he was an amazing brother, always going to church and she was surprised how God has changed Wancy’s life in so many ways. It was an unbelieve change and he was an example to all of them.Wancy was always supporting and advising them. She really trusted her brother Wancy.

I met Wancy one time that I was going to make a school project with Carina his sister ( That was about in 2000). He was just getting home from his town ( Tequisate, Esquintla). Wancy was studying accounting in The capital and at that time Wancy was visiting his family. I didn’t know but he was supporting his family with work and money. Carina introduced us that day as well. Since that day, we started a beautiful friendship, he was always talking about God. Wancy was always advising me and asking me to seek God as much as I could because he was the solution to our problems in life.Days later I went to his church. It was a small Christian church called “ Principe de Paz”.

So I was not working and decided to place an ad on the internet. My work ad was : looking for any office or selling items on ebay job.

So like two days later, I got an email from a lady telling that she works for a company based in India. she algo gave me some information about it and a web site,

Once we start chatting, she told me they were looking for an employee within us to work as payroll clerk or making checks for poeple that they buy materials from.

The first thing, I would have to buy a software wich I did and then they gave a back account information with $128,000.00 and I would have to start making payments to different ppl.

The first check was for a lady in Dallas for $26,000.00 but before that they told me to go to five different ups or fedex to pick up airway bills envelopes.

sso my schedule was going to be 9 hours a week and my payment would be $1200.00 per month.

so I really don't know if this work is legal at all or IF its just a scam and am losing my time.

So what do you guys think about it? please advice me. Should I leave it?

Thanks a lot

David

I am making a web site for church and now I want to add the menu bar but I don't know how to do it.

I wrote the options on side of the website but then I tried to make then clickable but nothing happen.

I am using CS5.

Please help me with it. I am stucked :(

Please give any information you might have.

Thank you and have a great day....

am doing a presentation and am using movie maker. I already did it but for many reasons I would like change the background a mean putting my picture but unfortunely I don't know how to do that, there is just an option to change the background color but I wangt to use a picture instead of just a color.

Btw, How Do I write a message over the picture.

Thank you and thanks for helping me.

David

I am applying for a different job and one of their requirements is to bring or provide 2-3 managerial references.

Please explain it to me.

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This is the question What is the notice period that you are required at present place/assignment ?

I will have a Job interview and was wondering if somebody can explain it to me.

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Estoy tratando de ponerle el gas al sistema del aire acondicionado. Nunca lo habia hecho antes de un carro de estos y me gustaria saber donde esta la linea de aire acondicionado en este Chevy malibu.

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I am a member of a church in Denver Colorado and we always record the predication which lasts for about 45 or 50 minutes long. We have a recorded, VHS AND other instruments. A guy told me that we need a Master DVD TO record good videos.

I was wondering what is the master CD or the best CD's to burn and record videos.

Please provide me any information you might have.

Thank you.

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I would like to change/replace "DENVER, CO" instead of "OCEANSIDE, CA"....What program could I use to do it?

Thank you so much.

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I am member of a local church in Denver colorado y we are in the need of creating a website for our church. They just assigned me to create it and get more information about it.

I have no idea how to start it.

Do you know guys a cheap or free program to create it?

Please give more information.

Thank you so much and God bless all of you.