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I am writing an essay for my English class and need help. Please?

Please revise and edit this short paragraph. Thanks a lot?

I am translating this paragraph from spanish to English. Please edit it!! Thanks a lot.

I lived in Villa Hermosa (Beautiful village) which is a county/municipality of Guatemala City. Before meeting Wancy, I was going to school “Sagrada Familia “with his sister Carina. We went to the same school for about 2 years and we were the best friends ever, always together and doing school stuff/homework and other stuff as well. We were always talking about random stuff such as School drama, love, and family. There was a time she told me some really good things about her brother Wancy, she said he was an amazing brother, always going to church and she was surprised how God has changed Wancy’s life in so many ways. It was an unbelieve change and he was an example to all of them.Wancy was always supporting and advising them. She really trusted her brother Wancy.

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    I had lived in Villa Hermosa, a beautiful village, which is a county/municipality of Guatemala City. Before meeting Wancy, I was going to school “Sagrada Familia" with his sister Carina. We went to the same school for about two years and we were the best friends ever, always together and doing school stuff or homework and other stuff as well. We were always talking about random stuff such as school drama, love, and family. There was a time when she had told me some really good things about her brother, Wancy. She said that he was an amazing brother, always going to church and she was surprised how God has changed Wancy’s life in so many ways. It was an unbelievable change and he was a great example to all of them. Wancy was always supporting and advising them. She really trusted her brother Wancy.

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