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Daniel
Lv 4
Daniel asked in Entertainment & MusicMusicRap and Hip-Hop · 8 years ago

Rate this verse out of ten?

I'll leave your blueprints covered in shoe prints

Poppin' Nuprin

Neighborhood nuisance

Murder your family for two cent

Makin' your crew tense

Brain's too dense

Leave the mic with two dents

Fresher than a whole mouth full of chewed mints

Givin' you rude hints

Cause if you're wack I'm gonna tell ya

I got the issue where they diss you in next month's Source I'm gonna mail ya

You're a failure

You're style's staler than a bowl of hardened rice

Scarred and sliced

I flunked kindergarten twice

But you ain't hard and nice

And you sure ain't servin' no bids

Sayin' you did is like seein' a damn virgin with kids

Creepin' like a phantom

Holdin' my dick like the Player's Anthem

Holdin' this microphone for ransom

Bitches ask me why do I talk nasty?

Grab an *** of every trashy whore that walks past me

My crew's on drugs, lookin' like zombies

Smokin' bomb trees

Racin' police

Update:

well this isn't mine, it's one of eminems old underground verses. that explains the degrading of women.

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  • ?
    Lv 6
    8 years ago
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    Peace. I like your flow and I like your punchline. You sound like an emcee a lot throughout this verse but I ain't for degrading women. You can bury that and put it in the dirt. I believe in being classy not trashy and carry yourself like somebody. I understand that it may be a fun line and all but I ain't wit it. There is someone out there who is but I'm a man baby, I don't play that. Step your character up.

    Peace.

    EDIT: 7

    10 minus the trashy line.

    Peace.

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    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    Oh sh*t ur returned i've got no longer seen u in an prolonged time yet u in all possibility do no longer understand who i'm to boot sick grant it a 5/10 unlikely feeling it EDIT: I wasn't somewhat precise here that plenty jointly as u have been pay attention I in actuality each and every so many times dropped via each and every and each so many times i grew to become named something Lupe yet i think of of it grew to become u who gave this mad in intensity seem at Oneirology or would have been somebody else returned in march and yea this section in actuality gets whacker a week there is fcking drake stans everwhere

  • ?
    Lv 5
    8 years ago

    6.4.

    To improve:

    Even out your bars

    Improve your topic

    Use similies n metaphors.

  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    7.5

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