Jay

No other album has caused such controversy, it changed hip hop forever and featured some of the most classical songs in hip hop history including "the way I am" "real slim shady" "stan" ECT.

Not to mention it was and still is not only the biggest first week selling album in hip hop history but is the 3rd highest first week selling album of all time in any genre of music, it was and still is easily shadys best and most controversial album and was Eminem at his pure best

It terms of flow lyrics voice how and what should I do to improve, here are some of my verses I recorded on my phone, one of then didnt have a beat so I went accapella-

http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/verse-with-no...

http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/verse-6

http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/verse-5

http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/2-verses

(lol I was kinda drunk in the first picture)

http://m1060.photobucket.com/profile/jaycruz2?pbau...

I'm 17 by the way and I haven't been spitting too long but please rate these and say how I can improve please, thanks.

http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/diss-track

http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/verse-2-1

http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/my-verse

I go to college Mondays and Tuesdays, my mom said I should get the bus but I hate the bus so much coz it's always late and I no these school bullies who also get that bus, so my only other way to get to college is to walk, which is 5 miles so it'll probably take me about an hour to get there, I don't mind the walking its just that I'm underweight and I'm eating alot and going to the gym to gain weight and I'm afraid if I'm walking 5 miles evey morning I'll start to lose weight again.

I'm 17 and I was told to take 4 steroid pills a day by my stepdad who's a bodybuilder but I only took 1 a day to be safe, anyway I took them for a week and gained 5 lbs, and im definetly quitting.taking.them.now but I just wanna no how much ive messed up my body though coz im scared if I hurt my body in that 1 week I used them

I'm 17 5ft8 and I'm 120lbs, I have been working out for almost a year and I've gained about 10 lbs, but lately my stepdad has been pushing me to use steroids, there small and pink and he said take 4 a day but I'm only taking 1 a day coz I don't wanna ruin my body, anyway today he gave me another one but I just pretended to take it and I through it away later, he's given me a whole bag of them and said to hide them from my mom or he'll get in trouble for giving me them, I don't wanna tell my mom coz all she's gonna do is shout at him then they'll get back together and everything will be awkward, I really dunno what to do, should I just keep taking 1 a day and pretend to take the others or should I just not take any, I have gained 4 lbs in 4 days of using these steroids and I no I'm working out enough and eating enough.

I'm 17 years old 5 ft 8 and weigh 116lbs, I've been working out for almost a year before I started working out I was 105lbs, anyway I've been stuck at 116lbs for a while and my step dad who used to be a bodybuilder gave me a bag of anabolic steriods, they are small pink and shaped in a star shape and he told me to take 2 in the morning and 2 at night, he said there are no side effects but I read online that there are alot of side effects so I really dint no what to do should I take them or not

This is my first full rap song and I'm 17 years old, plz rate it out of ten and say what you liked and what could be improved, thanks.

http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/my-first-full...

I'd choose the last option

I'm 17 year old boy and my moms got me a job in claires which is a girls shop without my permission and I have to work there for 4 weeks.

I can't believe how embaresing this is gonna be and I don't no what to do, im gonna be the only guy working there and I look quet feminine so im afraid people are gonna think im gay aswell, I can't believe how annoying my mom is and I don't no what to do now

My mom and her boyfriend stay up really late at night and have the TV in really loud even though they no I gotta be up early for college.

And even when they do go to bed they sit up all night laughing really loudly.

I've already spoken to them about this but they still don't listen, I also have no where else to go literally they are my only family.

I'm 17 so I could move out but I haven't got enough money and I'm still in college.

And the even more annoying thing is that when my mom or her boyfriend have to be up early they tell me to keep quet even if I'm not making any noise, this is really annoying me seriously I mean I probably get about 2 hours sleep maximum every night and when I get to college I'm so tried I can't even keep my eyes open, I really dunno what else to do

Im 17 and this is only the third rap ive ever spit, also please rate and tell me how to improve and also what you liked about it

http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/my-new-rap-ve...

My question is where can I get £3.80 literally right now, and plz don't say stuff like ask friends and family cause my family is broke and I have no one else too go too

I owe these dealers £10 and I've only got £5.20 that I got out my moms wallet, so basically if they don't get the money they said there gonna knock me out, and one of the guys said he's gonna run me over with his motorbike.

I don't no how I'm gonna get £4.80 by tommoriw morning when I see these guys in college.

There's literally no money in the house and my parents are broke as f*ck.

My question is what should I do and how should I get this money urgently.

His name is Ali which is very similar to afeni just like tupac, he smokes weed like tupac, he's black like tupac, he's got the same nose as tupac, he dresses like tupac aswel and he was born in 1996 the same year tupac died.

My question is it it possible that this boy is the incarnation of tupac shakur

My parents literally no nutin about it, my mom doesn't no who Dre tupac biggie or anyone is, the only rapper she knows is 50 cent and she kinda knows eminem coz she's seen 8 mile.

I'm just asking this outa curiosity coz I wanna no how much old people no about rap and hip hop

He disses me just coz I like eminem, I no if he saw me on the streets he'd get shot so y dont he just shut da f up already

I think eminem nail in the coffin is pretty dope

And please don't give answers like "I'd make friends" just say hypothetically you had not a single friend then where would you go at lunch and what would you do