I'm 17 how can I improve my rapping?

Hey what I've learned throughout my life is people don't wanna hear no fake sht ight. I thought ur rhymes were ight but there always room for improvement....talk about ur life and sht. If u dont smoke weed or do lines of coke then don't rap about that. If u ain't trappin then don't spit bout selling "bad weed" in my opinion if u smoked u would kno a better word instead of dat. Don't talk bout killin mufukas dat be frontin if u ain't even gotta gun ight. I rap about weed, poverty, shelters, abandonment, watching my mom poppin Vicodin and Percs and living on tha streets because that was my life until a 2years ago. I still smoke weed and I rap my best on it. People wanna hear that real sht my dude and that's it. Keep it real. People say my flow is like a combination of wiz khalifa (weed, intelligence) and ace hood (fast raps, metaphors). Good luck on rappin my dude btw I'm only 16.

Go on my profile like ma fb page and listen to some of my music.

Keep practicing a lot and listen to more rapping music. That should help. Never give up. (: