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RHH: Check out my short verse I spit?
Im 17 and this is only the third rap ive ever spit, also please rate and tell me how to improve and also what you liked about it
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- 8 years agoFavorite Answer
Negatives: You need to work on your voice, or rather getting your voice to match your lyrics. It's evident from listening that you're somewhat timid and inexperienced, and it doesn't fit with the lyrics since you're saying stuff like how your b!tc# has big ****. You have to say it like you mean it.
Positives: Your flow isn't half bad, and it sounds like you know what to do with what you've written. There weren't any serious problems concerning the actual performance.
