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Check out and rate these 3 different verses of mine?
I'm 17 by the way and I haven't been spitting too long but please rate these and say how I can improve please, thanks.
http://m.soundcloud.com/user31948753/diss-track
3 Answers
- 8 years agoFavorite Answer
you sound like you got the talent but you just need to calm down. i had this very issue when i started. it all sounded like bullshit, but as i got more experance it became more beliveable. keep on trin' and dont ever quit!
- Anonymous8 years ago
Put a bit of expression into it all you sound like all the way through is angry and dumb... as soon as i heard it i thought is this a joke? Sorry.
- 8 years ago
Ur ok but dnt rap about dumb **** rap is inspiration....has a message...ur jst sounds like threats u cant carry out
Source(s): Been writing for 12 years rapping for 5
