i need help writing poem or poetry?

I have actually been published in over 3 books for my poetry.

Being honest, writing an acrostic poem (the type of poem you did) will not touch a girl's heart. Being a girl myself, a guy has to be deep, and meaningful. I'm not going to write the poem for you, but maybe something like this:

Emmanuella,

I don't even think of that word as a name,

I think of it as life,

My air,

The moon,

The sun,

Taking those things away,

I have nothing to live for

BLAH BLAH BLAH Stuff like that, If a guy ever wrote a poem like that for me, I would be like AWWWW! :)

I can not write a poem such a lot days, however then once in a while concept will come and I'll get again on monitor. That's precisely what is going to occur to you, due to the fact I do not consider you'll be competent to give up writing. Hope you're feeling a little greater. x

Here's a couple:

E very

M an

M ust see you

A s I do.

N ever a sweeter or more

U nique girl

E videnced by your kind heart and

L aughter and wrapped up in

A ll the love I have for you.

E ach day when

M orning comes,

M y thoughts turn to you

A lways smiling

N ever a bad word. You have a

U nique kindness for

E veryone

L aughter to

L ight the day

A nd you fill up my heart.

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Emmanuella is so sweet and kind,

Makes my life in couplets rhyme.

Many have professed their love for you,

Above them all your innocence stays true.

Nothing but your soul is all I see,

Under your reflection beautifully.

Emmanuella means that God is present,

Luminescent He's seen in her hallo crescent.

Love has no better shrine than what is she,

All in all in God, and she and me are one in He.