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What do you think of this poem/ballad I wrote?
People hurt, people cry
Pain stricken and bleeds
People lose loved ones who’ve been there for a while
Through death or neglect
Love destroys worse than hate
For it manipulates
It’s selfish and used as weapons of lust
It makes excuses
(Chorus)
People hurt and lose
By pursuits
People hurt and lose
By neglect
People hurt and lose
From no communication
No one tries to fix what’s broken
3 Answers
- 8 years agoFavorite Answer
ok i write a lot of poetry myself, and im going to be VERY honest with you
that was terrible.
- Anonymous8 years ago
My opinion is that in nowadays poetry the message is more important than the classic rules of measure and rhyme. What I can feel from this poem is hurt and sadness. Like not even love will be enough to give happiness. The isolation of self in the society is making us more susceptible to hurt.
It's not an optimistic message, but it resonates with many lost souls.
