Would you care to offer comment/critique on this poem?

eww

I liked it better when your poetry was...less contrived.

My advice is to stay away from the line and stick with insanity...or genius...or which ever one made you the better poet.

Absolutely love. I feel the verses speak to the frustrating, satisfying,passionate, dark, wonderful, conflicting, life of an artist in any facet that endures the extremities of living in a world where you rarely fit in amongst the masses. LOVE IT!!

i like the circulate and rhythmn of the poem. uncertain appropriate to the call ... uncertain incredibly suits for me. probably some thing alongside the lines of "writing" ... interior the comparable essence of the story yet to benefit (or written). individually i like using "write" and "wrote" interior the poem. i think of you may desire to perchance use those analogies extra interior the poem. The 0.33 and fourth lines do no longer probably touch in this factor, which i think of they could desire to. additionally the line "My veins chop up open!" no longer probably confident approximately. could desire to perchance contain a line related to writing with purple ink which you bleed (that way invokes imagery of bleeding in a diffused way). The final stanza and lines i could additionally relate back on your writing. perchance alongside the line of i visit replace the story with my pen, or because of the fact the leaves of my e book end with the hollow of recent attractiveness will stir you as quickly as back (or alongside those lines). in spite of the undeniable fact that ordinary great poem. incredibly celebrate with the imagery. incredibly between the extra useful poems I even have study on Yahoo solutions.

twixt genius and insanity...amen. a fine line indeed.

I liked the two middle stanzas best.

Great poem.

Evadne Soleil

Wow, this one took my on a ride. Lots of imagery, and what really

took over for me was your rhyme pattern. Mid-way through I stopped

reading just to try and figure out how you were negotiating this, and

it's like a woman, don't try to figure her out, just accept her as she is.

Therefore, I accept you milady as a way-word poet.

Congrats

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A great friend is here and she read this aloud. It was even better. You have a new fan.

Well I am glad that your way lead you to post your words here.

Your style is evolving well, my compliments. A strong read.

this is now my new favorite of yours!

excellent♥♥♥

no critique from me

you ARE the wayword poet...welcome