Need help with descriptive essay! (Intro/Conclusion)?

I feel my intro and conclusion (especially) , are a bit weak. Can anyone think of a way to strengthen them? This is for a descriptive illustration essay.

[Intro] Many people have a special place that they adore. Whether it is the bright lights of a city or the serene ambience of the great outdoors, people admire these places because they strongly appeal to the senses. Throughout the past few years I have also grown to admire certain places and always look forward to visiting them again. The places that I adore visiting are Chicago, Bayview Bridge and concerts.

[Conclusion] To conclude, I adore visiting a variety of places. Whether it is the dynamic culture of downtown Chicago, the relaxing atmosphere at Bayview Bridge or the exciting energy at a concert I have come to adore visiting these places. Each one strongly appeals to the five senses.