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Adam
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Adam asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 8 years ago

What do you think about this new poem?

Tell em all I'm on vacation.

That I went to visit friends.

Tell em you haven't heard or seen from me in quite awhile.

When they ask you where I been.

Tell em I'm out on the west coast where it dont ever rain.

And I'm probably doin fine.

Just don't tell em I've gone crazy

That I'm still strung out over you

Tell em anything you want to just don't tell em all truth

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  • 8 years ago
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    Tell em anything you want to just don't tell em all truth

    Should it be 'the truth'?

  • 5 years ago

    For me a poem has to have rhythm. It would not unavoidably could rhyme besides the shown fact that it needs to hit my thoughts. i think of readability of expression is important to boot. i do no longer desire to 2d guess what i'm interpreting approximately. I continuously seek for what I term "poetic gem stones"interior the textual content textile.

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