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Can someone finish this converation please?
I am writing a historical novel, a husband and wife (Edmund and Ardellia) go to his acquaintance's home in hopes of a desperately needed business proposition. During an evening when Ardellia and the host meet for the first time. He behaves very antisocialy. Now I have the scene mapped out but Ardellia needs to complain or rather comment on the man's behaviour. Edmund practically worships him and subtly defends and rationalizes, waving his wife off.
Heavy footfalls announced someone's entrance.
Glancing towards the sound, she saw that Edmund had joined their little group. He took a seat next to hers. Behind him was another man, presumably the host. Who went directly to the windows on the western side of the room, and neither sat nor spoke throughout the evening.
The evening passed, the people eventually scattered. Ardellia and Edmund left for their apartment, with their son and her young brother at their side. In her room, Ardellia was not quite sure of what to do; it was far too early for sleep and the new atmosphere 's unfamiliarity had her nervous and filled with anxiety. She wandered outside and into her husband's room.
"How long are we staying?"
"I am not quite certain."
"Well what of the business proposition?"
"It is fine, all is going quite well." He answered flippantly,
"And what exactly does superintendence entail?"
"Paperwork, archiving, keeping properties in check."
"
Ardellia needs to suddenly comment on the snub.
2 Answers
- Anonymous8 years agoFavorite Answer
"sounds like a real loser job. I think it's time for me to skip town."
- Anonymous7 years ago
"What of the host?"
"What about the host? There is nothing wrong with him; his behaviour is completely normal. He is not quite used to strangers."